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NYC/NJ 2 song Collab whats really good?

BenRebel	Date: January 23, 2004 @ 2:19 PM looking to do a NYC/NJ rep anthem
four20three	Date: January 24, 2004 @ 2:31 AM :: It's all about the NYC, bitch you know me be spittin the timed rhyme faster than the eye can see the love of blood hides and resides inside of me in the NYC, bitch you can see It's all about the NJ, bitch you can't say you lived in a Jersey that isn't fuckin worthy of what you all spit the ill-est shit everyday but you can't say you stay in the NJ :: Kind of a dull rhyme, but some lines might help you out. I wouldn't recommend using it all unles syou think it's good, cause i don't think it's the best. I did it in like 60 seconds. NO thought in it. Holla.
bellachica	Date: January 24, 2004 @ 1:16 PM ur right there is no thought in it what so everrrr. try not cursing with the term bitch it shows you are no way a lyricist. peace.
four20three	Date: January 25, 2004 @ 7:33 AM lmao - like i said.. i didn't think at alll. 2 second rhyme. I don't think i have a good rap beat, but I do write lyrics (a lot better than the 30 second one above). I got a whole notebook full of complete songs. I also make rap beats. My friends say I can thrown down pretty good (my african-american friends say i can - for a white guy - haha.) but i dunno, I don't think i'm half as good as they say. Maybe it's just the words i spit that mean something to em', livin the same life that i have for 17 years. Haha came up with a good rhyme just now: livin the same life for seventeen years// drinkin vodka, plantin seeds and smokin them trees// till i open the wound and when i bleed it turns green// but my hesitation seems to believe or deceive me// another 45 sec rhyme - but it's better than the other. Anyway, I'll be more than willing to help ya out on your Collab the best I can, provide lyrics or a beat for free. All i ask is when you upload the finished song, you have the title of the description info say Lyrics and/or Music by: DJ Hyse. (you of course don't but the "and/or" you fill in whichever you want me to do - a little bit of lyrics, and a beat, or whatever you want. I guess I can throw down too if ya want me to. By the way, I do my beats on my desktop synthesizer, and they are all no less that 320Kbit (studio) quality. However you want me help, you got me if ya need me. Just note me on whatever ya want. And i'll check back at this post once in a while.
four20three	Date: January 25, 2004 @ 7:34 AM above where i said "I don't think i have a good rap beat, but I do write lyrics..." I meant to say: I don't think I have a good rap [voice], but I do write lyrics... (just so you are not confused)
bellachica	Date: January 25, 2004 @ 12:34 PM I do not think benrebel is going to reply to you. Here is some advice... I think you should stop with the 45 sec rap songs because they ruin any status of you being a good writer. Why don't you put some good songs on this post that you wrote in your notebook.k. Also being white has nothing to do with your talent. And you should not need any validation from African American friends to tell you so.
OXBLOODINC	Date: January 25, 2004 @ 3:58 PM word up.....peep ma musiq n holla back
MickeyBreezy	Date: January 25, 2004 @ 4:11 PM it would help if yo shit rhymed fluidly instead of having 2 read it a bunch of times 2 get the flow rite. yeah also im white n my shit is ill snoman.dmusic.com it doesnt really matter if ur white or not tho what matters is whether or not u got what it takes 2 b good so like bella said dont put up 30sec raps, post ur tight shit. ill definatly check ur shit out tho.
MickeyBreezy	Date: January 25, 2004 @ 4:12 PM oooohhh nothin 2 check
bellachica	Date: January 25, 2004 @ 6:31 PM snowman6453 stop bragging i just heard ur acappella track. I am not dissing because it does sound like a mix between bubba and eminem.lol.i telling the truth though. Hey but atleast you have confidence.
BenRebel	Date: January 26, 2004 @ 12:55 AM I am checking everyones page that posts to this thread..
four20three	Date: January 26, 2004 @ 7:13 AM aiight... aiight... I'll post one song (not my favorite, but i'm not posting my best work for obvious reasons of it not being copyrighted - and i don't my material stolen. If you go to hysell.dmusic.com and play the "Last Night" track (i believe it was the 4th Bass Attempt or something) - that beat of mine is for this: Last Night (lyrics and music by: Wes Hysell) ---------------------------------- [VERSE 1] I don't hate but I hate the love that lies inside of me// Cause I know the love of bloood it still hides inside of me// And i'll recollect my dreams as it seems I lived in pain// with hesitation of this blad closing in on my veins// Done some much for this world and i'm only seventeen// But i look back into the white light that i've never seen// until tonight when I put up the fight, for what is right// I look back at the lost world for the last goodnight// Devil inside is contemplating my death or life// As my boys droppin dimes on the situation tonight// Whether it's wrong or right, I'll take my life on this night// Cause i'm tired of the love, tired of the fight// Everybody two steps back and bust a move// Get your mind in the line and bust the groove// Spread the pain inside from me to you// Hoping you don't fall on this side of the groove// [CHORUS] Goodnight to the last night that i'll never see// I want the wait of the world, and the sufferein off of me// I can't take it, or break it, or shake it - cause I fake it// MAke it fade into the bright light that I can forsake it// (repeat) [VERSE 2] When I enrage this mother fucking four-walled cage// Offstage on my own, adrenaline guage// I light up the streets better than anyone today// on my own range of rage, explodin off stage// Better back up bitch before your overflowed// When I decode the encodes and reload my ammo// With this nine-millimeter being the cheater// In a fight with bows, in my own area code// When you speak you only feed the ammunition// To the politians opposition on this proposition// But the decomposition of this repetition mission// Was ignition for the exhibition of renditions// Better remember the fucking name, it's Hyse// With a heart hotter than hell, but it gets as cold as ice// When I put the fight for what's wrong and right// Tear this mother fucking roof off, when i'm fighting tonight// [CHOURUS] [VERSE 3] You know me, we've been smokin them trees// With the 5-0 on us, we be sweatin them beads// Cause they won't believe me if they see me on the streets// Stumblin round and round tryin to keep with my feet// Tryin duck into my boy's safe house// Cause the pigs all day are just fucking waiting to pounce// The back door we'll dip through and fucking bounce// With the pigs frontin' - playing cat n m ouse// We're running to the next stop but we're wasted// Light up a square but I can't even taste it// Lets face it i'm too fucking wasted to make it// So i'll turn around like a man and take it// But the pigs are dirty is little fucking town// At first sight of you runnin, they be takin' you down// They tested their mother fucking weapon on me on this night// I surrendered, but still I returned to white light// [CHORUS] ----------------------------------------------------- [notes on song] almost all of the lines, some words in the beginning of each line should be said before the first beat of the music hits for that line. I was trying to get rid of as many pauses as possible. It can be rapped, and if you don't believe me, let me know and i'll record it and upload it for ya. Also, this rap was originally written to be rapped by 3 rappers taking an outlook of their last night's on the world. Though, I never found two other rappers to rap VERSES 1 and 3. It doesn't make since if one rapper raps it all because their 3 different issues that occur on the same night (just none are related incidents to each other). IF you get my point, you'll understand it a little more. The last 5 lines (that's right - last 5 lines) in verse 1 are slower than the rest of the rap, because there are more spaced out and a lot less wording. ][ Well, that one in my big book of songs, not my tightest, but that a little bit of what I got.
four20three	Date: January 26, 2004 @ 7:15 AM Also, in the chourus, the 3rd line... If you rap it right, the beat that I had you uploaded and listen to, it mixes VERY well with the third line of the chorus if you rap it right. BEcause each time the music hits a different different note, you are saying another word, so it's a really good tie into the music.
bellachica	Date: January 26, 2004 @ 2:24 PM Ok you dont suck. happy.... stop talking about plants though you sound like a drug attic. lol
MickeyBreezy	Date: January 26, 2004 @ 3:43 PM that was really good 423
BenRebel	Date: January 26, 2004 @ 5:40 PM 423 - Don't know how you sound when you spit..(which can makes a big diffrence in what you wrote..) but you do have song body and structure down and there is a concept going so thats whats up keep it up.. Lyrics is now what I'm looking for.. looking for someone spit'n some new shit.. but still even if you don't want to spit yourself .. you could always sell track & hook deals or just ghost write the whole songs for peeps... What I'm looking for is how a person attacks a track, the flow, the confidence and then what they wrote .. does it sound written ... or are you really flow'n smell me? snowmaN - I would like to hear you really doing your thing on a track .. Last .. I don't care if you blue or red with green spots Mics and tracks don't care what your color you is son if you ill you ill
BenRebel	Date: January 26, 2004 @ 5:42 PM Sorry . thats: Lyrics is NOT what I'm looking for..
MickeyBreezy	Date: January 26, 2004 @ 8:49 PM ill have some new songs up soon i just got 2 record n put a beat on em n poof 2 more 4 ur listenin pleasure.
BenRebel	Date: January 29, 2004 @ 8:02 AM 5 MC's from the Bricks got down on it its Heat fo sho ! TRUE Anthem" id="83399">First Colab is done a snippet of the Heat will be put up some time today or tomorrow for a short time.. the title "NWK" 5 MC's from the Bricks got down on it its Heat fo sho ! TRUE Anthem
redrasta	Date: January 29, 2004 @ 9:20 AM Seethes quietly in the corner and wanders off to another thread....
TreBlak	Date: February 1, 2004 @ 5:26 PM yo nyc rapper down 4 whuteva so hit me up
TreBlak	Date: February 1, 2004 @ 5:26 PM yo nyc rapper down 4 whuteva so hit me up
BenRebel	Date: February 3, 2004 @ 4:24 PM TreBlak Hit me at ninjasongs@hotmail.com

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