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a couple of my poems

Nefy	Date: July 19, 2004 @ 12:23 AM Dark Windows I see you thru them But you do not see me I watch you always But you are unaware Why do you torture me so? I cry for you But you see no tears I have dark windows But you could see thru Why do you bring the rain? I see the tears no more But you still can't tell I am all alone But you do not know it Why can't you see my pain? I see the darkness But you could bring the light I feel teh coldness But you could make it warm Why don't you care to try? I try to show you But you are unable to see I am tired now But you are out of reach Why are my windows closed to you? ------------------------------ Inferno With In Outside my little world... no color, no warmth. inside the cold chamber... a flame flickers. the unreachable light... breached my darkness. nothing, will, could chase away... empowered and drawn. outside my little world... bright and louring. behind the steel door... fire lay down the path. a new world lay before me... i asked, i recieved. reborn out of darkness... i see what is given. outside my little world... i now own the light. inside my darkness... a raging fire bekkons. a balance within linked... the light, the dark. the hunger within... lurks in shaddows. outside my little world... i hunt for the longing. inside my living soul... an inferno consumes. ------------------------ Raging Soul Stop rapeing my thoughts and dreams Start rapeing my body and soul My heart bleeds furiously My soul screams darkness You look at me I look at you I smile You smile We both look away Visions of you flood my brain Dreams of you invade my nights Cut me deep Strangle me softly Our hunger is burried deep within Yet rages out when we touch Drink me in Make me yours Give me the eternal gift i crave Do as you will with my soul Stop rapeing my thoughts and dreams Start rapeing my body and soul ---------------------------- they aren't that great, but i thought i'd share them anyway
Soul-Persona	Date: July 19, 2004 @ 3:57 AM The one about 'Windows' reminds me of sitting in front of my computer talking to someone online that I care for way too much. Windows... it's perfect! I like them though. Good work.
moam	Date: July 19, 2004 @ 4:02 AM I really like the poems, expecially the window one!
Nefy	Date: July 19, 2004 @ 10:04 PM thank you
ebarbarella	Date: July 22, 2004 @ 6:33 PM Awesome!! love your words Nefy
tsand19151	Date: July 22, 2004 @ 7:02 PM nice!!!
weswelsch	Date: July 23, 2004 @ 6:43 PM you're right i did like dark windows.
Nefy	Date: August 21, 2004 @ 4:38 PM awww thanx Barbie yup you can definatly relate to dark windows
Nefy	Date: October 6, 2004 @ 6:15 PM thanx to everyone for all the kind words for my poems....seems as tho everywhere i go people really love dark windows...i think i may make it a song one day...i have a new one i posted if you care to check it out. Nefy

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