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Tell me what you all think, and post your's here too
theharme
Date:
August 28, 2004 @ 11:18 PM
Hey, here's some lyrics I have, tell me what you
think, don't be too harsh, I'm entitled to
artistic liberty! haha.
Right Eyes
To all the crazy people who might look to eggs
and seashells
For their marks of life
Their necks might be more tense, their hair might
cover their right eyes
And maybe they’re so tired they don’t want to
turn around
And look at you in your sublime reference of
point of aspect
Of good of natural of balance of steady oh of
calmness oh of
Drugged up innocence but who am I to referee in
games we got expelled from
It’s up to gravitation to throw you to the stars
And burn you up as you enter that most fear that
surrounds all your
Bodies all your heavens all the seven loves you
spat away as you keep spitting her away
rozetta357
Date:
October 4, 2004 @ 2:03 PM
YES! (I can't say anything else)
You are very talented. You can check mine out on
the forum and also on writing.com where my name
is love... and I'm in the group love and be
loved.
Peace.
rozetta357 AKA Love...
MCCUBED
Date:
October 6, 2004 @ 1:05 AM
LIKE A STAR,
I'VE COME SO FAR AND CAN'T GO BACK
....THAT IS FROM THE ALADDIN SONG I HEARD TODAY
WHEN I WATCHED IT WITH MY BABY. I JUST THOUGHT
IT WAS A GOOD LYRIC
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