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just to depress the hell out of everyone

navedub	Date: June 15, 2006 @ 11:17 PM Naught The world conforming to me The world conforming to you The world conforming for nothing Conforming to what we do Conforming for conformation And feeling it’s something new Conforming for adoration Conforming is what we do It seems originality would be a nice surprise But nothing done and nothing said was never once surmised The wise say not a single word Yet if they speak it’s surely heard Although the words may seem absurd They’ve just conformed for two Take and give but not too much The dream is leaning on a crutch The dreamers use it like a clutch To shift into a gear Let us say what’s right and wrong And signify this endless song The leaders leading winding down a subtle stream to naught _____________________________ make 'em grim
Nocturnai	Date: June 30, 2006 @ 2:27 PM hell yes! very nicely done...
TameasDust	Date: June 30, 2006 @ 4:23 PM so say the
MrPoetic	Date: June 30, 2006 @ 6:22 PM nice piece
thesoloer	Date: June 30, 2006 @ 11:00 PM it's cool.
navedub	Date: July 2, 2006 @ 4:28 AM is that a cow? i totally relate! mooo. out. how do you check if there are replies? is there a page for that? don't mean to be rude with my slow responses. here's some more to rip your hearts out. Star Lit Cold Retreat Sweet September take away the blues of summer’s heat And meet me with the winter bite of star lit cold retreat Envelope me with bitter air for I may care to see A holiday that is no more a place for us to meet The sleet and snow I do not know but burning fire does rain To wash us all away from here and dry up our remains Remain no more where seasons die and nothing comes to change How strange it is to live in bliss and never know it’s name Where children laugh and mother’s milk is given to the kind And father’s wrath is “Take a bath!”, no trouble you will find For life to us it comes with ease and anger is a gentle breeze That seizes what is in the seas of star lit cold retreat Now new November drifts along and with it comes an aging song That resonates within us all, before the years, before the fall And fall we will for we are men but once when we were boys We knew of nothing sorrow brings and only of our joys The toys we will collect in life become a mirror of our strife And strive I do for death to rise to clear away my tired eyes Recall no more the empty lies of star lit cold retreat December dawns the many yawns and longings of my soul A goal to be a simple man and crawl out from my hole Alone no more inside the war, I am not of the fray I give it up and tilt my cup to toast the newborn day When peace on earth, good will towards men is fervent in it’s might And hope abounds inside the sounds surrounding every night For light is come into the world and on this day we meet To greet each other with a smile on star lit cold retreat Though I may moan and I may ache, the pain is fleeting here I summon up my agony but joy is in my tear I fear no more the sinking floor that sinks throughout the year And though my tongue is tied with glee I yell the loudest cheer Dear God I thank you for this life and loving family The mystery of happiness is sometimes lost to me But though I’m blind I have a mind to conquer my defeat And see you in that glowing sky of star lit cold retreat ___________ ok, maybe it gets more optimistic towards the end.

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