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MrPoetic	Date: July 31, 2006 @ 8:43 PM ]...what once was..is never gone... ...holding back, secretly hiding that once was song... ...days past...days forgotten...days still here... ...the memories voice long past...but its echo still so near... ...i cant see you...no longer in a glance... ...reaching out...only to see..the reflection of my own hand... ...holding days past..these days last... ...hoping the 'Ending' Already written....retracts fast... ...to take away the taste...of what was... ...a lust seeping thru the cracks of that extended arms palm... ...there is 'US'...days past...Time wasted... ...days past...Life pacing... ...dasy past..its a love gasp... sleeping..breathing..reaching for a grab... ...yet nothing...thin air... ...wishing I'd never fallen...wishing my heart was a pair.. ...days gone...days missing... ...ponder your moves..of this...thoughts never ending... ...let you hurt me...in days past... ...not wanting pain...but telling you to return..Ironicly i ask... ...days...days still with me...always... ...chasing..your glance..what a waste... its also on my page lol ~FPC
MrPoetic	Date: August 2, 2006 @ 8:44 PM
AbortiveMind	Date: August 3, 2006 @ 8:07 AM I'm liking the way you played with the past - present - future. Not only by the tenses but by the feelings evoked and the few contradictions Nice writing
MrPoetic	Date: August 3, 2006 @ 4:04 PM thanks uppp'd for more feedback