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A poem I wrote a few weeks ago

AdNauseam

Date: June 21, 2007 @ 10:02 PM

If the whole world
Had been destroyed,
And you looked upon the chaos
Would you still be happy?

And if the oceans
Boiled into the sky
And you turned on that flame
Would you still be happy?

If the heart of the only one
Who knows you was punctured
And you ignored the blood
Would you still be happy?

But if your little crush
Who loves your face
Barely as much as his own,
Tripped and fell
A stubbed toe
Perchance a bruise

Would you still be happy?

ShadowMom

Date: June 21, 2007 @ 10:57 PM

one telling thing is... the only one who knows you... not the only one who loves you. You have some startling light and dark stuff going on here, and the imagery is rather intense. Nice moody writing Nodding