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A poem I wrote a few weeks ago
AdNauseam
Date:
June 21, 2007 @ 10:02 PM
If the whole world
Had been destroyed,
And you looked upon the chaos
Would you still be happy?
And if the oceans
Boiled into the sky
And you turned on that flame
Would you still be happy?
If the heart of the only one
Who knows you was punctured
And you ignored the blood
Would you still be happy?
But if your little crush
Who loves your face
Barely as much as his own,
Tripped and fell
A stubbed toe
Perchance a bruise
Would you still be happy?
ShadowMom
Date:
June 21, 2007 @ 10:57 PM
one telling thing is... the only one who knows
you... not the only one who loves you. You have
some startling light and dark stuff going on
here, and the imagery is rather intense. Nice
moody writing
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