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Give me more (A real emotional track)

K3VIN	Date: September 19, 2007 @ 11:30 PM http://k3vin.dmusic.com/music/ 1st Track basically just a short poetical track about some recent/past thoughts, troubles, mental addictions, lack of friendship etc. I'm tired of weed ,what it did is disgustin everytime I Eat, i get sick to my stomach everytime I breath, everytime I tryta sleep, everything is fucked up and im sick of discomfort been bustin my nuts tryna be somethin but my so called friends just keep frontin can yall please fuck it nobodies listenin nobodie gives a shit its ridiculous no one gives a fuck no i wont slit my wrist couple people keep me out of trouble see though im just a bit pissed off wish god would just stop the evil (your not real) and the pain that i go through was anti social cause oh the pain that i go through, this so true thats why i ask why it exists (the pain) thats why i ask why we exist (in vain) how are we so selfish why worry about hell we in the middle of its pits (this day) Why is all I ask thats all I ask why why are people so blind WHY WHY EVERYTIME I TRY TO OPEN THERE EYES I Cry WHY, WE been livin a lie I dont understand why its just in its 2nd copy rough stages but I'd appreciate any feed back to make it better.. like certain effects i should put in some parts.. i know i gotta cut out some stretched stuff. Thanks in advance. Artist Comments: 1255 remember me.
K3VIN	Date: September 19, 2007 @ 11:32 PM Beat produced by oursin productions
aflunky	Date: September 20, 2007 @ 1:53 AM it's not bad. The beat is pretty good. Your flow and lyrics completely complement the beat. and the quality is decent, though it is a rough, so it will probably get better when you're done. I like your direction. I would experiment with the quality and effects. See what sounds good and what doesn't. Maybe dub over your vocals.
LordTrey	Date: September 24, 2007 @ 8:44 PM Ayo that is hot yo!...THe flow is tight and hits on with the beat..you get mad props with your lyrical wordplay but you always had a sick rhyme scheme..all in all its tight now polish that up make it a bit longer maybe wit another two verses and its sick