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Something To Last

mattbanx	Date: October 30, 2007 @ 12:41 AM A track that I put up a few weeks ago that I want some thoughts on. Since I can't be as interactive in forums as I would like to be. I have been striving to find better ways of recording, and this recording is in a 192 bit stream to hopefully show the quality of the recording for the best as I can. I want to learn how to songwrite above all, but the best recorded representation of that definately can't hurt. Would love some good constructive thoughts of this song, or if this is okay the way it is. The song is about how globalism has affected the marketplace as well as dreams: SOMETHING TO LAST All through life Something is waiting by the door All hearts are stained And in thinking of what's in store Thinking in the past Of something to last All of my youth Steel factories, pride and grace All darkened over Seen in old scars on the elders face Thinking of the past Of something to last Of what's in the gloom Stands a flicker of light Old memorials Past dreams that come to light Of what was meant to be Another finds the key So many places I hav'nt been to, I want to see Many dark ghettos All the past dreams of what to be Thinking in the past Of something to last All through life Something is waiting by the door All hearts are stained And in thinking of what's in store Thinking in the past Of something to last All of my youth Steel factories, pride and grace All darkened over Seen in old scars on the elders face Thinking of the past Of something to last Of what's in the gloom Stands a flicker of light Old memorials Past dreams that come to light Of what was meant to be Another finds the key So many places I hav'nt been to, I want to see Many dark ghettos All the past dreams of what to be Thinking in the past Of something to last
mattbanx	Date: October 30, 2007 @ 12:47 AM The first verse is repeated here for some reason. Although it is not in the song. Sorry for the confusion in that. There is not an edit command here.
mattbanx	Date: October 30, 2007 @ 12:50 AM Make that the entire lyrics repeated twice. Don't know what is causing that since that is not the case in my wordpad. Oh well, you get the lyrics twice.
zedsalt	Date: October 30, 2007 @ 11:49 AM Alan Greenspan was on Charlie Rose's show recently, and he said that the foreign outsourcing of jobs was GREAT for the economic health of the average worker in those areas where the greatest number of jobs were lost. What they say about his genius must be right, and I must a complete idiot regarding economics, as I can't make one bit of sense out of what he said.
mattbanx	Date: October 31, 2007 @ 9:43 PM I also saw one of those commercials on how Walmart is all so much helping communities. Looks good, sounds good, and if I really needed the job, I would probably swallow my pride and lurk my butt in that local Walmart asking for a job. I still remember though at the tail end of the steel factories up to where I live (Duluth, MN) before jobs became mainly service jobs. I guess it's called progress. Whatever it is, it sure bites just the same.

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